Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.txt
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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
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From: rtgwg <rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org> Sent: 06 July 2020 01:19 I think that the reference to bgp-model in this I-D has to be Normative. Both in the example of how the YANG might be used by a protocol and in the examples, the text only works if the bgp-model remains as it is now - if the structure changes, then those two parts of this I-D become a nonsense. Tom Petch A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Data Model for Routing Policy Management Authors : Yingzhen Qu Jeff Tantsura Acee Lindem Xufeng Liu Filename : draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.txt Pages : 41 Date : 2020-07-05 Abstract: This document defines a YANG data model for configuring and managing routing policies in a vendor-neutral way and based on actual operational practice. The model provides a generic policy framework which can be augmented with protocol-specific policy configuration. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list rtgwg@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
- I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.txt internet-drafts
- Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.… tom petch
- Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.… Acee Lindem (acee)
- Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-17.… tom petch