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Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor

Chris Inacio <inacio@cert.org> Wed, 05 June 2019 19:42 UTC

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From: Chris Inacio <inacio@cert.org>
To: Jarrett Lu <jarrett.lu@gmail.com>, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org>
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Thanks for the review Jarrett.  Much appreciated.




On June 4, 2019 at 3:17:17 PM, Jarrett Lu (jarrett.lu@gmail.com<mailto:jarrett.lu@gmail.com>) wrote:

Hope I am reviewing the latest version. I found a couple nits.

On page 5, the 2nd item of the software-descriptor information type doesn’t end correctly.

o  Version and patching information: Version numbers, patch
      identifiers, or other information that

Page 5, words in wrong order? E.g.,

any information that in is the abstract realm

“that in is” -> “that is in”


Otherwise the document looks good enough to be published.

- Jarrett



On Jun 4, 2019, at 7:19 AM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org<mailto:odonoghue@isoc.org>> wrote:

Folks,

This begins a two week working group last call for:
Definition of the ROLIE Software Descriptor Extension
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sacm-rolie-softwaredescriptor/

Please review this document and send comments (including suitability to publish) to the mailing list.

This WGLC will close on 19 June 2019.

Thank you!
Karen and Chris
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