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Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC

Jarrett Lu <jarrett.lu@oracle.com> Fri, 19 July 2019 18:25 UTC

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From: Jarrett Lu <jarrett.lu@oracle.com>
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Subject: Re: [sacm] WGLC- ECPC
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I have reviewed the current and previous version of this draft. I am in
support for this document to move forward to publication.

I did notice a small nit in Sec. 1, "can made available" -> "can be made
available".

Regards.

- Jarrett

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