Re: [Sat] Small correction to draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture-00.txt

Martin Gfeller <mgf@acm.org> Sun, 28 January 2024 14:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Sat] Small correction to draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture-00.txt
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Dear Denis and Thomas

A small remark:

In 2. Terminology, "Asset Metadata Artifacts" has the wrong entry. It
duplicates the definition of "Asset Provider".

Best regards
Martin

On Sat, Jan 27, 2024 at 4:02 PM Thomas Hardjono <hardjono@mit.edu> wrote:

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> *From:* internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> *Sent:* Saturday, January 27, 2024 10:00 AM
> *To:* Denis Avrilionis <denis@compell.io>; Thomas Hardjono <
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> *Subject:* New Version Notification for
> draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture-00.txt
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> draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture-00.txt has been
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> Name:     draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture
> Revision: 00
> Title:    Asset Schema Architecture for Asset Exchange
> Date:     2024-01-27
> Group:    Individual Submission
> Pages:    12
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture-00.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture/
> HTMLized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-avrilionis-satp-asset-schema-architecture
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> Abstract:
>
>    A management architecture for asset schemas and profiles is needed to
>    enable entities in the tokenized assets ecosystem to instantiate
>    tokens within one or more asset networks.  An asset network may be
>    constrained to support only a select class or type of token to be
>    present in the network.  In the SATP protocol, the receiving gateway
>    at the destination network is assumed in its preparatory stages to
>    evaluate the transfer request of a tokenized asset from the sending
>    gateway at the origin network.  In order to evaluate the proposed
>    transfer, the receiving gateway must have access to the asset
>    definition schema upon which the token was based in the origin
>    network.  The current document discusses the management architecture
>    for the asset definition schema and the schema-profiles derived from
>    the definition schema.
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