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Subject: Re: [Sat] I-D Action: draft-ietf-satp-core-03.txt
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Thanks Wes,

Your early comments are greatly appreciated.

The authors eyes are “too close” to the spec, and in some places in SATP-core we just assume the readers knows what we are talking about.


Best
--thomas






From: Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net>
Date: Wednesday, March 20, 2024 at 9:44 PM
To: Thomas Hardjono <hardjono@mit.edu>
Cc: sat@ietf.org <sat@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Sat] I-D Action: draft-ietf-satp-core-03.txt
Thomas Hardjono <hardjono@mit.edu> writes:

> We are continuing to update the draft and hope to be posting a new
> version in a couple of weeks or so.

Thanks for updating it and the warning.  I'll wait to review again after the next update and I am glad my comments were found to be useful (and as a reminder: they were from a technical contributor view point, not from a chair view-point -- I should get no special considerations).
--
Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI

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