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Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05

"Ori Finkelman (IETF)" <ori.finkelman.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 27 August 2019 07:38 UTC

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From: "Ori Finkelman (IETF)" <ori.finkelman.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 27 Aug 2019 10:37:58 +0300
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To: Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
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Hi Linda,
Thank you for your time and comments.
I will address them in the next revision.

Best regards,
Ori

On Mon, Aug 26, 2019 at 8:16 PM Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.
>  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
> other
> last call comments.
>
> The terminology RR (Request Router) and CP (Content Provider) specified by
> the
> Terminology are not used for the entire document. I assume that RR would
> be the
> one request content, isn't? is RR same as Client?  Is RR part of
> Downstream CDN
> Provider? is the CP same as Downstream CDN provider or Upstream CDN
> Provider?
>
> who issued the Redirect Target?
>
> It would be good for the document to clearly specify the relationship of
> all
> the entities, such as who makes request and who respond, and who use the
> Redirect Target capability, etc.
>
> Thank you very much.
> Linda Dunbar
>
>
>

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