Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 02 February 2024 17:42 UTC

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From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 02 Feb 2024 09:41:44 -0800
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To: Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
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Hi Radia,

Thanks for the review. But somehow your review is not recorded in the
datatracker, would you please take a look? Maybe try to close the review
from the Secdir? Review request for draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang/reviewrequest/18653/>

Thanks,
Yingzhen

On Fri, Feb 2, 2024 at 8:51 AM Radia Perlman <radiaperlman@gmail.com> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
>
>
> This document defines a YANG data model augmenting the IETF OSPF YANG
> model to provide support for OSPFv3 Link State Advertisement (LSA)
> Extensibility as defined in RFC 8362. Creating, parsing, and evaluating
> YANG models is a specialized skill that I don't have. This looks reasonable
> to me, but no one should take any comfort from that.
>
>
> Radia
>