Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-09

"Shawn M. Emery" <semery@uccs.edu> Tue, 10 December 2019 21:36 UTC

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Hi Jeff,

Comments begin with SME...

On Tue, Dec 10, 2019 at 8:48 AM Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org> wrote:

> Shawn,
>
> On Mon, Dec 09, 2019 at 05:51:30PM -0700, Shawn M. Emery wrote:
> > Reviewer: Shawn M. Emery
> > Review result: Ready with nits
>
> [...]
>
> > 1. Relating to privacy:
> > I believe that this section [security considerations] should also
> document
> > the security impact of deploying BFD on VXLANs for monitoring tunnel
> > traffic.
> > Which additional information, if any, can now be obtained with BFD usage?
>
> BFD protects transport between two systems and, in the profile envisaged in
> this document, does not typically involve itself in protecting user-managed
> endpoints.  (In such circumstances, they might consider standard RFC
> 5880/5881 BFD as a user-provisioned mechanism.)
>
> The traffic for this mechanism is thus between two systems at the tunnel
> level and only covers the information necessary to permit the BFD protocol
> to execute, including any BFD security mechanisms that may be applied to
> that session.  There are thus no end user privacy considerations for this
> mechanism.
>

SME: This was not clear to me when reading the draft and think that the
text above would help in defending that there are no privacy concerns that
this specification introduces.


> > 2. Editorial:
> > Echo BFD is out of scope for the document, but does not describe the
> > reason for this or why state this at all?
>
> This is covered by RFC 5880 section 5.  Similar to most other IETF
> documents, when documenting extensions and we do not conflict with the base
> behavior, we don't try to copy and paste the motivations as it waters down
> the normative text.  (If we were IEEE, we'd reissue the entire suite every
> time we touched something...)
>
> Our preference is to leave it alone.
>
> At best, we could say "See RFC 5880, section 5."
>

SME: This was also not clear to me, as my initial investigation did not
lead me to this text.

Shawn.
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