Re: [secdir] [Last-Call] [dns-privacy] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com> Mon, 23 December 2019 22:12 UTC

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Date: Mon, 23 Dec 2019 14:12:27 -0800
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Subject: Re: [secdir] [Last-Call] [dns-privacy] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
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Hi, here are comments I mistakenly sent to a thread about another dprive
last call. Summary: the section about "DoH Specific Considerations" is
highly questionable, and seems like advocacy rather than a representation
of IETF consensus.

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Hi,

I found two issues with [this draft]. The document mentions unattributed
"concerns" in a few places. That doesn't seem like helpful content, but I
can't say that such "concerns" and rampant use of the passive voice are
uncommon in today's IETF.

Secondly, I found the entire section "3.5.1.5.2.  DoH Specific
Considerations" to be objectionable, and recommend removing it. It mentions
many concerns that are better covered in RFC 8484 and/or HTTP RFCs, and
contrasts DoH with DoT in ways that are specious. Both TLS and HTTP allow
extension fields and metadata, so there's nothing unique to DoH here
(source: I've implemented DoH and ESNI clients). The entire section amounts
to a description of fields that privacy conscious DoH clients /might/ send
if they were poorly implemented. But it seems strange to stop there.
Implementation quality ratholes can go on for a while: for example, the
document doesn't mention the numerous problems with today's TLS, PKI, and
BGP infrastructure that apply to both DoT and DoH.

thanks,
Rob