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[secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06

David Mandelberg <david@mandelberg.org> Sat, 18 April 2020 18:37 UTC

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Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

The summary of the review is ready with nits.

(nit) In section 3.1, I think "by changing the key used for integration 
protection" should say "integrity" instead of "integration"

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