Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06

Klaus Hartke <klaus.hartke@ericsson.com> Sun, 19 April 2020 15:48 UTC

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From: Klaus Hartke <klaus.hartke@ericsson.com>
To: David Mandelberg <david@mandelberg.org>, "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-core-stateless.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-core-stateless.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-core-stateless-06
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David Mandelberg wrote:
> (nit) In section 3.1, I think "by changing the key used for integration
> protection" should say "integrity" instead of "integration"

Fixed in the next revision. Thanks!

Klaus