Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-05

[Yaron Sheffer <[e-mail]>]

Looks good to me. Thank you!

	Yaron

On 8/17/21, 03:17, "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]> wrote:

    Sorry for late followup, here is the update, the diff is
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lsr-pce-discovery-security-support-06
    Yaron, let authors know if your comments are addressed in v-06.
    Thanks!

    -Qin
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    Hi Qin, 

    Can you publish a revision so that Yaron assure it satisfies his comments? 

    Thanks,
    Acee

    On 8/12/21, 9:21 PM, "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]> wrote:

        Thanks Acee and Tom for good suggestion, we will take them into account.

        -Qin
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        I'd also recommend changing, "key names" to "key-ids or key-chain names" since this is what is actually being advertised.
        Thanks,
        Acee

        On 8/10/21, 11:53 AM, "tom petch" <[e-mail]> wrote:

            From: Lsr <[e-mail]> on behalf of Yaron Sheffer <[e-mail]>
            Sent: 10 August 2021 14:57

            So let me suggest:

            <tp>
            An offlist suggestion for you to consider

            OLD
                Thus before advertisement of the PCE security parameters, it MUST be insured that the IGP protects the authentication and integrity of the PCED TLV using the mechanisms defined in
                [RFC5310] and [RFC5709], if the mechanism described in this document is used.

                Moreover, as stated in [RFC5088] and [RFC5089], the IGP do not provide any encryption mechanisms to protect the secrecy of the PCED TLV, and the operator must ensure that no private data is carried in the TLV, for example that key names do not reveal sensitive information about the network.

            NEW

             Thus before advertising the PCE security parameters, using the mechanism described in this document, the IGP MUST be known to provide authentication and integrity for the PCED TLV using the mechanisms defined in  [RFC5304],  [RFC5310] or [RFC5709],

                Moreover, as stated in [RFC5088] and [RFC5089], if the IGP does not provide any encryption mechanisms to protect the secrecy of the PCED TLV, then the operator must ensure that no private data is carried in the TLV, e.g. that key names do not reveal sensitive information about the network.

            Tom Petch
            </tp>

            Thanks,
                    Yaron

            On 8/10/21, 15:01, "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]> wrote:

                Yaron:
                Thank for clarification. I agree to keep the last sentence in the second paragraph of section 7 as is.
                But I prefer to add the addition references in the previous sentence as follows:
                "
                Thus before advertisement of the PCE security parameters, it MUST be insured that the IGP is
                protected for authentication and integrity of the PCED TLV,, with the mechanisms defined in
                [RFC5310] and [RFC5709] if the mechanism described in this document is used.

                As stated in [RFC5088] and [RFC5089], the IGP do not provide encryption mechanism to protect
                the privacy of the PCED TLV, if this information can make the PCEP session less secure then the operator should take that into consideration.
                "
                If you better wording, please let me know.

                -Qin
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                Hi Qin,

                Sorry, but I find your latest proposed text very confusing, because we should be focusing on integrity protection and not privacy (=secrecy) of the TLV. So I would prefer to keep the text as-is, with the addition of a reference to the IS-IS and OSPF security mechanisms that were discussed on this thread.

                Thanks,
                    Yaron

                On 8/10/21, 05:00, "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]> wrote:

                    Hi, Yaron
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                    >Hi Qin,

                    >Thank you for your response.

                    >* RFC 3567 (for IS-IS) is obsoleted by RFC 5304. Unfortunately RFC 5304 still uses HMAC-MD5, which would be considered insecure nowadays.
                    >* RFC 2154 is very old and Experimental (and only supports RSA-MD5 signatures). I'm not an OSPF expert by any means, but I'm willing to bet that there are no production implementations of this RFC. (I'm willing to be proven wrong).
                    >Is there another RFC that define a protection mechanism for OSPF?

                    >All in all, there appear to be no good options for the IGP.

                    [Qin Wu]Yes, we do have alternatives, see Les's response in the separate email
                    "
                    On 8/9/21, 23:36,"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <[e-mail]> wrote:
                    For IS-IS security please also see RFC 5310.
                    For OSPF security please see RFC 5709.
                    "
                    >To your last point, when I mentioned decoupling the mechanisms, I was suggesting to use the extension you define even if the IGP *cannot* be secured. If you think this is reasonable, please add such text to the Security Considerations.

                    [Qin Wu] Okay, how about the following change
                    OLD TEXT:
                    "
                    As stated in [RFC5088]
                    and [RFC5089], the IGP do not provide encryption mechanism to protect
                    the privacy of the PCED TLV, if this information can make the PCEP
                    session less secure then the operator should take that into consideration .
                    "
                    NEW TEXT:
                    "
                    As stated in [RFC5088]
                    and [RFC5089], the IGP do not provide encryption mechanism to protect
                    the privacy of the PCED TLV, if this information can make the PCEP
                    session less secure then the operator should take that into consideration
                    when getting the mechanism described in this document deployed.
                    "
                     >Thanks,
                     >      Yaron

                    >On 8/9/21, 16:09, "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]> wrote:

                      >   Thanks Yaron for valuable comments, please see my reply inline below.
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                        >Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer
                        >Review result: Not Ready

                        >This document defines a mechanism (a TLV) to advertise the PCE Protocol security required (use of TCP-AO and its key ID, or alternatively use of TLS) within the routing protocol being used.

                        >* Sec. 3.1: I don't understand why "SHOULD advertise" and not MUST. Especially given the strict client behavior defined later.
                        [Qin]: I believe "SHOULD advertise" is consistent with client behavior defined later, i.e., we apply SHOULD NOT language to the client behavior.
                        I am not sure we should change it into strong language with MUST. Since if IGP advertisement doesn't include TCP-AO
                         support flag bit or TLS support flag bit, NMS may fall back to configure both PCC and PCE server to support TCP-AO or TLS. That's one of reason I think why we choose to use SHOULD language.

                        >* Sec. 3.1: should we also say something about the case where both methods are advertised, and whether we recommend for the client to use one of them over the other?

                        [Qin]: It is up to local policy, which has bee clarified in the end of section 3.1. Hope this clarify.

                        >* Sec. 4: typo (appears twice) - "to be carried in the PCED TLV of the for use".

                        [Qin]:Thanks, have fixed them in the local copy.

                        >* Sec. 7: this phrase appears to be essential to security of this mechanism: "it MUST be insured that the IGP is protected for authentication and integrity of the PCED TLV". I would expect more guidance: how can this property be ensured in the relevant IGPs?
                        [Qin]:I think mechanism defined in [RFC3567] and [RFC2154] can be used to ensure authenticity and integrity of OSPF LSAs or ISIS LSPs and their TLVs. Here is the proposed changes:
                        OLD TEXT:
                        "
                           Thus before advertisement of
                           the PCE security parameters, it MUST be insured that the IGP is
                           protected for authentication and integrity of the PCED TLV if the
                           mechanism described in this document is used.
                        "
                        NEW TEXT:
                        "
                           Thus before advertisement of
                           the PCE security parameters, it MUST be insured that the IGP is
                           protected for authentication and integrity of the PCED TLV with mechanisms defined in [RFC3567][RFC2154] if the
                           mechanism described in this document is used.
                        "
                        >* Also, a possibly unintended consequence of this requirement is that if the IGP cannot be protected in a particular deployment/product, this mechanism would not be used. Please consider if this is likely to happen and whether we want to forego PCEP transport >security in such cases. My gut feel (not based on experience in such networks) is that the threat models are different enough that we should decouple the security of IGP from that of PCEP.

                        [Qin] I agree IGP security should be separated from PCEP security. IGP extension defined in this document is used by the PCC to select PCE server with appropriate security mechanism. On the other hand, Operator can either use IGP advertisement for PCEP security capability or rely on local policy to select PCE. If operator feels IGP advertisement is not secure, he can fall back to local policy or rely on manual configuration. Hope this clarifies.







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