[secdir] Reviews for draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-lcd-02

Alexander Zimmermann <alexander.zimmermann@comsys.rwth-aachen.de> Tue, 14 September 2010 13:31 UTC

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Hi folks,

thanks again for reviewing the draft. We incorporated the feedback from

* Juergen Quittek:
	- Integrate ICMPv6 discussion directly in Section 3. Section 7.3 is deleted.

* Catherine Meadows:
	- Clarified security section. Section 10
	- Clarified why not a higher probing frequency is used. Section 5.4


* Adrian Farrel:
	- Clarified the experimental status of the document (last paragraph in section 2)

* Enrico Marocco: nits

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New version (-03) has been submitted for draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-lcd-03.txt.
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-lcd-03.txt

Diff from previous version:
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-lcd-03

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