Re: [secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-netmod-revised-datastores-09

[Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]>]

Resent with to address fixed.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Sun, Jan 7, 2018 at 10:52 PM, Donald Eastlake <[e-mail]> wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> The summary of the review is Ready.
>
> This draft specifies an elaborated datastore model for YANG based on
> experience with the original model in RFC 6241. It is probably
> correct, as stated in the Security Considerations, that this model
> itself has no security effect.
>
> The Security Considerations refer to the "YANG security module
> security guidelines" by that quoted string only. I would assume these
> guidelines are in a document somewhere and it would be nice to give a
> pointer to that document.
>
> Section 5.1, Page 11, third line up from the 5.1.1 heading, should the
> reference to "Section 5" be a reference to "Figure 2"?
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
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