[secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa

Wes Hardaker <wjhns1@hardakers.net> Sun, 17 March 2024 19:33 UTC

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Subject: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa
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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13
Reviewer: Wes Hardaker
Review Date: 2024-03-15
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I reviewed the diffs since my last early review in May of 2023, and found that the authors did some good architecture of the text ordering which helped address my concerns at the time.  Thanks for adding the additional details to the document.


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Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI