[secdir] Review of draft-ietf-dime-diameter-api-08

[Sean Turner <[e-mail]>]

I have reviewed this document (twice now) as part of the security 
directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being 
processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the 
benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs 
should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This version does not address the comments I made against the -07 
version, notably:

The document needs to discuss the security considerations surrounding 
the API in your document, as opposed to just pointing to RFC5388.

Nits:
- Sec 3.1.1: add "." to end of last sentence
- Sec 3.4.3.1 and 3.4.3.2: r/- The NAI of the user./The NAI of the user.
- Sec 3.4.5.7: Move description before C code.

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