Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-02

Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com> Wed, 09 November 2016 15:29 UTC

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Date: Wed, 09 Nov 2016 10:29:50 -0500
From: Carl Wallace <carl@redhoundsoftware.com>
To: Shawn M Emery <shawn.emery@oracle.com>, <draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis.all@ietf.org>
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>Does this clarify the changes?

Yep. Thanks.

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>> - The IANA considerations section was right in 6112, but probably
>>doesn't
>> belong here (at not least as defining a 'new' well-known name).
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>I've taken out the words 'new' from this section.
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>Thanks for your review and I've made the recommended updates in the next
>version of the draft.
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>Shawn.
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