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Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions-14

Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com> Tue, 04 May 2021 08:15 UTC

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To: Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>, secdir@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-srv6-extensions-14
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Hi Yaron,

thanks for your comments I'll address them in the next version of the 
document.

thanks,
Peter


On 03/05/2021 14:56, Yaron Sheffer via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Yaron Sheffer
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This document specifies extensions (TLVs, sub-TLVs etc.) to IS-IS in support of
> Segment Routing on IPv6.
> 
> The document states that the security considerations are a union of security
> considerations from a bunch of predecessor document. This seems reasonable to
> me.
> 
> Details:
> 
> * The first sentence of the Abstract is missing a word, perhaps "architecture".
> 
> * Introduction: typo: "This documents".
> 
> * Capabilities: to allow for future extensibility, you should probably add
> "Implementations receiving this TLV MUST ignore any other bits that may be set
> in the Flags field".
> 
> 
> 
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