[Sedate] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 16 October 2023 23:42 UTC

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Subject: [Sedate] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-10
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## Comments

### S2.2

* I concur with Lars' DISCUSS point.  Seems best to update or not update
  RFC 3339 section 4.3 ("there is no try" :-).

### S4.1

* Consider a sentence or two at the end that calls out the prohibition
  of "." and ".." from the time-zone-part production trailing comment.
  It seems to my uneducated eye that the ABNF actually allow this, so
  the checking would need to be done separately by implementations?

## Nits

### S1.2

* "UTC was designed to be a useful successor for" ->
  "for which UTC was designed to be a useful successor"

### S2.1

* "always was" -> "was always" or even just "has been"