Re: AD Evaluation comments on : draft-ietf-grow-rfc1519bis-02.txt
Geoff Huston <gih@apnic.net> Mon, 07 November 2005 21:47 UTC
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From: Geoff Huston <gih@apnic.net>
Subject: Re: AD Evaluation comments on : draft-ietf-grow-rfc1519bis-02.txt
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uuuuusssshhhhhpppp! (loud sucking noise of pulling this mail back - it was meant for the GROW mailing list - sorry for the noise - jet lag barin fade :-)) Geoff At 08:24 AM 8/11/2005, Geoff Huston wrote: >Hi, > >In the WG meeting this morning there was a request to share the AD's >evaulation comments on draft-ietf-grow-rfc1519bis-02.txt with the Working >Group. > >We've checked with the AD on the procedure here, and we're happy to >forward these comments on to the mailing list. These comments have already >been passed to the document authors and the document is being worked on by >the authors to respond to these comments. > >Thanks, > > Geoff & Dave > >------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > >--- > > The IANA makes allocations from this pool to Regional Internet > Registries, as required. These allocations are made in contiguous > bit-aligned blocks of 2^24 addresses (a.k.a. /8 prefixes). > >I don't believe it is a good idea to describe this at this level of >detail, I believe it is intended for informational purposes but this >draft is standards track and it is not intended to limit the >flexibility of the IANA/registry interaction into only giving /8s. > >--- > > The RIRs, in turn, allocate or assign smaller address blocks to Local > Internet Registries (LIRs) or Internet Service Providers (ISPs). > These entities may make direct use of the assignment (as would > commonly be the case for an ISP) or may make further sub-allocations > of addresses to their customers. > >For most regional registries (geoff please correct me if I am wrong), >they only deal with LIRs. They treat ISPs and all their other >customers the same and call them LIRs. Basically, RIRs allocate or >assign address space to LIRs, which in turn can be ISPs, large >corporations or whatever other entitity that has the money and is >willing to obey the rule of being an LIR. > >--- > > In practice, prefixes of length shorter than 8 are not allocated or > assigned though routes to such short prefixes may exist in routing > tables if or when aggressive aggregation is performed. > >Never say never, I would refrain from comments like this, we never know >whether a large >DSL/cable or whatever provider might actually get a /7. I would simply >drop this line and I admit that this one is a bit of a nitpick. > >--- > > To this end, it is recommended that mechanisms to facilitate such > migration, such as dynamic host address assignment using [RFC2131]) be > deployed wherever possible, and that additional protocol work be done > to develop improved technology for renumbering. > >Probably add a few more references to documents that can help here and >expand the text a little bit. > >--- >I don't think the following sentence is constructed particularly well: > > Also, since the routing cost associated with assigning a multi-homed > site out of a service provider's address space is no greater than the > old method of sequential number assignment by a central authority, it > makes sense to assign all end-site address space out of blocks > allocated to service providers. > >I know what you are trying to say but I was first reading it such that >the registries have different blocks of address space for customers >that are a service provider and other customers and that there is >really no need to do this. It is meant that one can as well >assign address space to an enduser who multihomes from it's provider >instead of getting an assignment from the registry. However, I am not >sure whether I agree as the provider of the enduser probably doesn't >like this situation when the customer leaves as it can easily end up >receiving traffic that was intended for the former customer due to >filtering and failures somewhere in the Internet. > >--- > >typo & perhaps some editorial work needed: > > If, for some reason, the provider were to > use an obsolete IGP that doesn't support classless routing or > variable-length subnets, then then explicit routes all /24s will > ^^^^^^^^^ > >---- > >Use example network range where possible > > >---- > >I would prefer to not give any examples on how to do classless >in-addr for >/24 delegations and use the reference earlier in this >section. I think showing the problem is fine, I would leave the >solution completely to the referenced rfc to avoid duplication and >people immitating the example without reading the reference. > >---- > >While: > > 8. Analysis of CIDR's effect on global routing state > >is an interesting chapter, I am not sure whether it is a good idea to >refer to pictures that cannot be in the document. In addition, it >is a bit more of an opinion piece than exact science . I would be inclined >to drop it but understand that this is just one opinion. > >---- > >Output from: > >idnits 1.72 > >draft-ietf-grow-rfc1519bis-02.txt: > > Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html : > > * The document seems to lack an Introduction section. > * The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section. > Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate... > the boilerplate looks good. > > Checking nits according to >http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt : > >Nothing found here (but these checks does not cover all of >1id-guidelines.txt yet). > >Miscellaneous warnings: > > - Line 90 has weird spacing: '...classes of ne...' > > Run idnits with the --verbose option for more detailed > information. > >---
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