Re: [Sidrops] AD review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress.

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Wed, 04 March 2020 20:47 UTC

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> 1: The document says: Updates: 6811 (if approved) please add a
> sentence to the Abstract saying how / what it updates in 6811.

stole your text, tyvm, but added to intro not abstract

> 2: Please use the updated (RFC8174) requirements language - I've
> included it below for easy copy-n-paste.

sure

> 3: Please include an index  - assuming you are using xml2rfc, <?rfc
> toc="yes" ?> should do it for you....

you are welcome for the now less short document

> 4: Help my understand / justify why this is Standards Track and not
> BGP or Informational. The Shepherd writeup just says Standards Track
> with no explanation as to *why*. I suspect that the "Updates: 6811"
> might be the justification/

ask warren.  he might have a good explanation. :)  but i do not believe
this belongs in the document.  whack me otherwise.

-01 published

randy