[Sidrops] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Sidrops] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)
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Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sidrops-rp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for this - I think that this document is useful. One issue with the IETF standard format is that it can be difficult to find which RFCs need to be read to fully solve a particular problem, particularly considering that some of those RFCs may be updated or obsoleted by other RFCs. I agree with Warren's comment that it would make a good living document, if IETF had such things. In terms of reading the document, I noted that it uses quite a lot of acronyms that I was not immediately familiar with and that are not defined in the document. Perhaps the document could be improved by having a short terminology section? The acronyms that didn't appear to be defined include CRL, INR, CA, ROA. 4.2.1. Manifest To determine whether a manifest is valid, the RP is required to perform manifest-specific checks in addition to those specified in [RFC6488]. I found the above paragraph as being unclear, in that I don't know what "those" is referring to, and hence I suggest more clearly identifying “those” checks. Finally, I agree with Alvaro's comment related to section 4.3: This document probably shouldn't be giving recommendations. Perhaps better to just keep this as "However, most RP software ignores such objects.", or combine it with the previous sentence.
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