Re: [Sidrops] Lars Eggert's Discuss on draft-ietf-sidrops-rov-no-rr-05: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Randy Bush <[e-mail]>]

lars:

thanks for reviewing the draft

> #### Section 3, paragraph 1
> ```
> -    the received paths aginst the new data.
> +    the received paths against the new data.
> +                         +
> ```

whoops

> #### Paragraph 0
> ```
>  metadata for this document indicated a intended status of "Internet Standar
>                                       ^
> ```
> Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g.
> "an article", "an hour".

uh, i suspect that this is above my pay grade 
 
> #### Section 1, paragraph 1
> ```
> k paths affected by RPKI-based policy so Route Refresh is no longer needed.
>                                      ^^^
> ```
> Use a comma before "so" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are
> closely connected and short).

uh, ok

> #### Section 4, paragraph 1
> ```
> s, then it MUST issue a route refresh so those alternatives may be evaluated
>                                      ^^^
> ```
> Use a comma before "so" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are
> closely connected and short).

ibid

thanks again

randy