Re: [Sidrops] [WGLC] draft-ietf-sidrops-rp - ENDS: Mar 7, 2019

Nick Hilliard <nick@foobar.org> Sun, 17 March 2019 11:15 UTC

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Date: Sun, 17 Mar 2019 11:15:42 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] [WGLC] draft-ietf-sidrops-rp - ENDS: Mar 7, 2019
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Chris Morrow wrote on 17/03/2019 08:42:
> Please have a read through this document, comment/complain/etc as
> appropriate. The decision on forward progress or necessary edits ends
> Mar 07, 2019.

Mar 7?  That doesn't leave much time.

Overall this looks like a useful summary for RP implementers, but care 
will need to be taken in future to ensure that the doc is kept current.

Is the draft missing a reference to rfc 8416?

The document needs a multiple-pass edit for both style and grammar 
before it can be handed off to the RFC Editor.  I had a look at this 
earlier today, but there's too much to handle in an email - it needs 
someone to sit down with the xml source and spend a couple of hours 
hacking at it.

Nick