Re: [Sidrops] Alvaro Retana's Yes on draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-04: (with COMMENT)

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Mon, 13 August 2018 17:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] Alvaro Retana's Yes on draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-04: (with COMMENT)
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> (1) §3: "...the router SHOULD use the AS of the router's BGP
> configuration".  If not ambiguous, when would it be ok to not use the
> ASN from the local configuration?  IOW, why SHOULD and not MUST?

ok.  hacked.

> (2) §1: s/the origin validation state of the is set to as NotFound/the
> origin validation state is set to NotFound

yep.  someone already dinged me on this one

> (3) [nit] The language in the Introduction is very tentative for a
> Standards Track document.  For example: "This document attempts to
> clarify...The implementation issues seem not to be about how to
> validate...The issues seem to be ..."  Either this document clarifies
> or it doesn't; IOW, this is not an attempt at clarification.

i am willing to harden the language.  but this would seem to need
support in the wg.  your call.

> I'm sure the issues are known.

well, not if you ask your account rep :)

will not push -05 until a few more comments come in.

thanks for the review!

randy