AD review comments on draft-degener-sieve-copy-01.txt
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Date: Sun, 25 Jan 2004 07:47:32 -0800
From: ned.freed@mrochek.com
Subject: AD review comments on draft-degener-sieve-copy-01.txt
To: Jutta Degener <jutta@sendmail.com>
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I just reviewed this specification and I think it is quite close to being ready for last call. My only comments are: (1) An example showing the use of the extentsion is needed. In particular, I've found that it really helps to have something that shows people what needs to be in the "reauire" clause. (2) There needs to be an IANA considerations section telling IANA what to do. Something like this should appear as a section after the security considerations: 5 IANA Considerations The following template specifies the IANA registration of the copy Sieve extension specified in this document: To: iana@iana.org Subject: Registration of new Sieve extension Capability name: copy Capability keyword: copy Capability arguments: N/A Standards Track/IESG-approved experimental RFC number: this RFC Person and email address to contact for further information: Jutta Degener Sendmail, Inc. 6425 Christie Ave, 4th Floor Emeryville, CA 94608 Email: jutta@sendmail.com This information should be added to the list of sieve extensions given on http://www.iana.org/assignments/sieve-extensions. (3) IPR boilerplate is missing and needs to be added as a separate section just before the copyright: Appendix B Intellectual Property Rights Statement The IETF takes no position regarding the validity or scope of any intellectual property or other rights that might be claimed to pertain to the implementation or use of the technology described in this document or the extent to which any license under such rights might or might not be available; neither does it represent that it has made any effort to identify any such rights. Information on the IETF's procedures with respect to rights in standards-track and standards-related documentation can be found in BCP-11. Copies of claims of rights made available for publication and any assurances of licenses to be made available, or the result of an attempt made to obtain a general license or permission for the use of such proprietary rights by implementors or users of this specification can be obtained from the IETF Secretariat. That's it. Jutta, if you can make these changes quickly that would be great, if not I'll probably go ahead and get the last call started anyway and the update can happen during the last call. Ned