Re: I-D Action:draft-ietf-sieve-refuse-reject-07.txt

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Wed, 28 May 2008 08:13 UTC

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Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Sieve Mail Filtering Language Working Group of the IETF.
>
>
> 	Title           : Sieve Email Filtering: Reject and Extended Reject Extensions
> 	Author(s)       : A. Stone, et al.
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-sieve-refuse-reject-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 14
> 	Date            : 2008-05-27
>   
This version looks good to me.

Some nitpicking about references:

The draft header says:
  Updates: 3028 (if approved)

However RFC 5228 says:
 Obsoletes: 3028

So I think this document needs to do the same thing (that is, together 
RFC 5228 and this draft are obsoleting RFC 3028)

> 1.1.  Conventions Used in This Document
 [...]
>    Conventions for notations are as in RFC 3028 [SIEVE] Section 1.1.
I suggest this is changed to reference RFC 5228 [SIEVEBIS] ...
>    [SIEVE]    Showalter, T., "Sieve: A Mail Filtering Language",
>               RFC 3028, January 2001.
... and this reference can be made Informational.