Re: [Simple] WGLC of draft-ietf-simple-msrp-cema-02

This version looks good and ready to go.

Just a few editorial comments:
- section 4.1 2nd paragraph, s/can not/cannot
- section 4.4, 2nd sentence, s/a MSRP/an MSRP/ 
- section 5.5, 2nd paragraph, s/When UAs fallback/When UAs fall back/
- section 6.2, 3rd paragraph, use of subjunctive means it should be also support, not also supports: s/RECOMMENDED that a CEMA-enabled MSRP endpoint also supports one/RECOMMENDED that a CEMA-enabled MSRP endpoint also support one/ 
- section 6.2, in the paragraph before the NOTE at the end of the section, s/depending on local policy chose/depending on local policy choose/
- section 6.2 in the NOTE just before section 6.3: s/the user need to be able/the user needs to be able/
- section 6.2 in the NOTE just before section 6.3: s/try to anyway establish/try anyway to establish/

Nancy

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Subject: [Simple] WGLC of draft-ietf-simple-msrp-cema-02

This is a Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-simple-msrp-cema-02:

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-simple-msrp-cema-02

The WGLC will conclude on 29 September 2011. Please send your comments, including nits and "this is ready to go" type comments, to the authors and the working group mail list.

Thanks!

Ben.

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