[Sip] Publication request for draft-ietf-sip-hichhikers-guide-05
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Subject: [Sip] Publication request for draft-ietf-sip-hichhikers-guide-05
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I have just requested publication of draft-ietf-sip-hichhikers-guide-05 The following is the proto writeup that goes with the publication request. PROTO writeup for http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide- 05: "A Hitchhiker's Guide to the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)" (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? Keith Drage The document has been reviewed and is ready for forwarding to IESG for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? Document history: - draft-rosenberg-sip-hitchhikers-guide-00 was submitted 27th February 2006 and expired 31st August 2006. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-00 was submitted 21st June 2006 and expired 21st December 2007. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-01 was submitted 9th October 2006 and expired 19th April 2007. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-02 was submitted 8th March 2007 and expired 8th September 2007. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-03 was submitted 5th July 2007 and expired 6th January 2008. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-04 was submitted 15th November 2007 and expired 18th May 2008. - draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-05 was submitted 24th February 2008 and expires 27th August 2008. WGLC was initiated in the SIP WG on draft-ietf-sip-hitchhikers-guide-03 on 15th October 2007 with comments requested by 29th October 2007. Review was made and comments were received from: Francois Audet, Mary Barnes, Andrew Booth, Spencer Dawkins, Martin Dolly, John Elwell, Avshalom Houri, Cullen Jennings, Joerg Ott, Brian Stucker, Abigail West. During the course of the work comments have also been made by: Diego Besprosvan, Spencer Dawkins, Keith Drage, John Elwell, Cary Fitzgerald, Miguel Garcia, Vijay Gurbani, Michael Hammer, Alan Hawrylyshen, Paul Kyzivat, Dave Oran, Dan Romascanu, Brian Rosen, Henning Schulzrinne, Henry Sinnreich, Samir Srivastava, Hannes Tschofenig, M Vasudeva, Dean Willis. It should be noted that once published as an RFC, this is a document that will need to be regularly revised, as and when sufficient new SIP material is published to justify a new version. There has been a key discussion on the which documents should be included. In particular example documents like draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples have been specifically excluded. This received some discussion in the WGLC and RAI review without consensus being obtained. As this document is probably subject to revision in the future, if experience proves that the decision to exclude these documents was wrong, then it can be reversed in the next published version. There is a fine line in some cases as to whether to include a draft/RFC or not. In these cases we are looking to the reader community to address the positioning of this line in future editions. Attention is drawn to the following statement in the document: It is very difficult to enumerate the set of SIP specifications. This is because there are many protocols that are intimately related to SIP and used by nearly all SIP implementations, but are not formally SIP extensions. As such, this document formally defines a o RFC 3261 and any specification that defines an extension to it, where an extension is a mechanism that changes or updates in some way a behavior specified there. o The basic SDP specification, RFC 4566 [RFC4566], and any specification that defines an extension to SDP whose primary purpose is to support SIP. o Any specification that defines a MIME object whose primary purpose is to support SIP Excluded from this list are requirements, architectures, registry definitions, non-normative frameworks, and processes. Best Current Practices are included when they normatively define mechanisms for accomplishing a task, or provide significant description of the usage of the normative specifications, such as call flows. The SIP change process [RFC3427] defines two types of extensions to SIP. These are normal extensions and the so-called P-headers (where P stands for "preliminary", "private", or "proprietary", and the "P-" prefix is included in the header field name), which are meant to be used in areas of limited applicability. P-headers cannot be defined in the standards track. For the most part, P-headers are not included in the listing here, with the exception of those which have seen general usage despite their P-header status. Attention is drawn to the fact that an Informational RFC, RFC 3325, is listed as a core SIP specification. This received widespread discussion on the list at the time it was included, and there was unanimous consensus that it should be so listed. (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization, or XML? While the document indicates documents outside the SIP WG, the document underwent the RAI review process in parallel with working group last call, and during this was extensively reviewed by experts from those other groups. The document shepherd considers that no further external review from an external specialist is necessary. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document been filed? If so, please include a reference to the disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on this issue. The document summarises a large number of SIP protocol related documents and does not introduce new technical requirements. The document shepherd therefore has no concerns with the document. There have been no IPR disclosures on this document. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The needs for such a document has been well indicated on the SIP mailing list. It may be concluded that there is strong support throughout the working group, and throughout the RAI area, for such a document. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) None indicated. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/.) Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews? If the document does not already indicate its intended status at the top of the first page, please indicate the intended status here. The document has been reviewed against the guidelines in RFC 4485 and it is believed that the document is conformant with those guidelines. For ID-NITS the checks against idnits 2.08.10 reports the following. It should be noted that these are significantly outdated references to drafts. As the intent is that the document is published with whatever the latest version is that applies, it does not seem relevant to publish a new version to allow IESG and IETF review. The WG did investigate leaving the version number off altogether, but this creates problems in XML2RFC to do this easily. Drafts continue to be published in later versions. Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- No issues found here. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- No issues found here. Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- No issues found here. Miscellaneous warnings: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- == Line 1080 has weird spacing: '...ions in the S...' Checking references for intended status: Informational ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ---- -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2543 (Obsoleted by RFC 3261, RFC 3262, RFC 3263, RFC 3264, RFC 3265) -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2915 (Obsoleted by RFC 3401, RFC 3402, RFC 3403, RFC 3404) == Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of draft-ietf-sip-outbound-11 == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of draft-ietf-sip-answermode-06 == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-tcp-05 == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-ietf-sip-certs-05 == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-03 == Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-media-capabilities-02 == Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of draft-ietf-mmusic-file-transfer-mech-06 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-sip-record-route-fix-01 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-sip-subnot-etags-01 == Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of draft-ietf-sip-sips-07 == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-rohc-sigcomp-sip has been published as RFC 5049 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-simple-simple-01 == Outdated reference: A later version (-01) exists of draft-ietf-sip-dtls-srtp-framework-00 == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of draft-ietf-ecrit-framework-04 -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2833 (Obsoleted by RFC 4733, RFC 4734) == Outdated reference: A later version (-04) exists of draft-ietf-sipping-update-pai-00 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-sip-ipv6-abnf-fix-00 == Outdated reference: A later version (-01) exists of draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-00 == Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of draft-ietf-sip-body-handling-01 == Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of draft-ietf-sip-session-policy-framework-02 == Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of draft-ietf-sip-connect-reuse-09 == Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of draft-ietf-sipping-consent-format-05 == Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of draft-ietf-sip-location-conveyance-09 Summary: 0 errors (**), 23 warnings (==), 3 comments (--). (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. The document is an informational RFC, contains no RFC 2119 language, and all the references are therefore correctly informative. (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document's IANA Considerations section exists and is consistent with the body of the document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC2434]. If the document describes an Expert Review process, has the Document Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during IESG Evaluation? There are, correctly, no IANA considerations from this document. (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the document that are written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in an automated checker? The document contains no material written in a formal language, and as such there are no validation requirements. (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract or introduction. Working Group Summary Was there anything in the WG process that is worth noting? For example, was there controversy about particular points or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? Document Quality Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? If there was a MIB Doctor, Media Type, or other Expert Review, what was its course (briefly)? In the case of a Media Type Review, on what date was the request posted? Personnel Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Who is the Responsible Area Director? If the document requires IANA experts(s), insert 'The IANA Expert(s) for the registries in this document are <TO BE ADDED BY THE AD>.' Technical summary. The Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) is the subject of numerous specifications that have been produced by the IETF. It can be difficult to locate the right document, or even to determine the set of Request for Comments (RFC) about SIP. This specification serves as a guide to the SIP RFC series. It lists the specifications under the SIP umbrella, briefly summarizes each, and groups them into categories. Working group summary. There is strong consensus in the working group to publish this document. Document Quality This document is a summary or compendium of the IETF publications relating to SIP, and as such, contains no requirements or RFC 2119 language, and as such there is no requirement for implementation of this document. The document underwent thorough review by a number of experts in both working group last call, and through the RAI area review process. It should be noted that once published as an RFC, this is a document that will need to be regularly revised, as and when sufficient new SIP material is published to justify a new version. Personnel The document shepherd for this document was Keith Drage. The responsible Area Director was Cullen Jennings. The IANA Expert(s) for the registries in this document are <TO BE ADDED BY THE AD>. _______________________________________________ Sip mailing list https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sip This list is for NEW development of the core SIP Protocol Use sip-implementors@cs.columbia.edu for questions on current sip Use sipping@ietf.org for new developments on the application of sip
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