[sipcore] #18: Awkward description
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#18: Awkward description
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Reporter: worley@… | Owner:
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: minor | Milestone:
Component: rfc4244bis | Version:
Severity: In WG Last Call | Keywords:
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This para in section 3 is awkward:
This specification defines parameters detailed in Section 6.1 for
carrying the following information in the History-Info header:
and some of the following items. E.g., some of the items are not
"parameters", some are described using words that are not their parameter
names, etc.
Better would be something like "The following information is carried
in the History-Info header, as detailed in section 6.1:".
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