Re: [sipcore] WGLC: draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme - some comments from Christer

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 23 April 2019 06:11 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com>, SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [sipcore] WGLC: draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme - some comments from Christer
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Subject: Re: [sipcore] WGLC: draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme - some comments from Christer
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Hi,

Below are a couple of editorial comments from me:

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Q1:

The Introduction indicates that 3261 is updated by allowing new algorithms. Then Section 2 contains procedures, but it is unclear whether those are the same as in 3261, or if they update 3261.

I think there should be a head section, "Updates to RFC 3261", that includes any updated procedures, and the updated ABNF.

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Q2:

Please use "header field" terminology instead of "header".

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Regards,

Christer




On 22/04/2019, 22.26, "sipcore on behalf of A. Jean Mahoney" <sipcore-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of mahoney@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Hi all,
    
    This starts a 2-week Working Group Last Call for 
    draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme. Please send your comments to the list 
    by May 6.
    
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sipcore-digest-scheme/
    
    Thanks!
    
    Jean
    
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