Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
"A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com> Tue, 27 October 2015 21:46 UTC
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Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
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Hi Christer, The draft looks good to me. Just a few nits: 1. Introduction 2nd paragraph: "requires new values are required" => "requires new values". 4th paragraph: "have been followed" => "have been defined" You may also consider adding a reference to TS 24.229, which defines values for access-info, to the 4th paragraph. Thanks! Jean On 10/18/15 2:10 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote: > Hi, > > I've submitted a new version, -01, where the category is changed to 'Informational'. > > Regards, > > Christer > > -----Original Message----- > From: dispatch [mailto:dispatch-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg > Sent: 18 October 2015 21:59 > To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> > Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [sipcore] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)] > > Hi, > >> If 7315 is informational, why does the update need to be standards track? > > Good point - I guess it doesn't have to :) > > Regards, > > Christer > > > On 18 Oct 2015, at 6:49, Christer Holmberg wrote: > >> Hi, >> >> Based on Ben’s guidance, I’ve submitted a draft which makes the ABNF >> update. >> >> NOTE: As RFC 7315 is an Informational RFC, I had to add the RFC as an >> Informative reference in the draft, in order to pass the Idnits check. >> >> >> A new version of I-D, draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00.txt >> >> has been successfully submitted by Christer Holmberg and posted to the >> IETF repository. >> >> >> >> Name: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf >> >> Revision: 00 >> >> Title: P-Access-Network-Info ABNF Update >> >> Document date: 2015-10-18 >> >> Group: Individual Submission >> >> Pages: 4 >> >> URL: >> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf >> -00.txt >> >> Status: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf/ >> >> Htmlized: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 >> >> >> >> >> >> Abstract: >> >> This document updates RFC 7315, by modifying the extension-access- >> >> info part of the P-Access-Network-Info header field Augmented Backus- >> >> Naur Form (ABNF). >> >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> >> >> >> >> From: sipcore [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer >> Holmberg >> Sent: 18 October 2015 10:52 >> To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> >> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>; >> Cullen Jennings <fluffy@iii.ca> >> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 >> (4474) >> >> Hi, >> >> So, shall I address the draft to some WG, or? >> >> draft-holmberg-dispatch ? >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> >> Sent from my Windows Phone >> ________________________________ >> From: Ben Campbell<mailto:ben@nostrum.com> >> Sent: 14/10/2015 17:21 >> To: Christer Holmberg<mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> >> Cc: Cullen Jennings<mailto:fluffy@iii.ca>; DISPATCH >> list<mailto:dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE<mailto:sipcore@ietf.org> >> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 >> (4474) >> On 8 Oct 2015, at 21:03, Christer Holmberg wrote: >> >>> Hi Cullen, >>> >>> So, you are suggesting a SIPCORE draft that updates the ABNF? >> >> This is where the chairs will point out that special-purpose >> extensions are generally not in scope for sipcore :-) If so, this >> might could also be done as AD sponsored. >> >> Ben. > _______________________________________________ > dispatch mailing list > dispatch@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dispatch > _______________________________________________ > dispatch mailing list > dispatch@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dispatch >
- [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… Cullen Jennings
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… A. Jean Mahoney
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmber… A. Jean Mahoney