[sipcore] draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-01: WGLC comments

Brett Tate <brett@broadsoft.com> Wed, 11 December 2013 16:40 UTC

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Hi,

The following are some comments concerning draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-01.

Thanks,
Brett

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Section 3:

- B2bua-Hops should be Max-Forwards.

Section 3.2 paragraph 1:

- Potentially could clarify that the middle box is answering because of Max-Forwards 0 (instead of answering for another reason).

Section 3.2 paragraph 2:

- As discussed within the following email, I agree that requiring a specific reason-text value might not desirable.  This is because I view the text parameter to be similar to the status-line's reason-phrase.  If something is needed instead of just 483 for automation reasons, the reason-params potentially could be expanded to include a new parameter such as "traceroute".

http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/straw/current/msg00194.html


Section 7:

- [RFC3261] should be added; it is referenced within section 3.1.


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