[Sipping] draft-ietf-sipping-gruu-reg-event-07 just posted

[Paul Kyzivat <[e-mail]>]

I revised draft-ietf-sipping-gruu-reg-event again.

This was going to only have changes requested by the IESG. But then 
there have been some significant last minute changes in 
draft-ietf-sip-gruu-11 (not yet released the last I knew), that also 
required changes here.

The following things have been done:

- an incorrect reference (to RFC 3860 rather than 3680), spotted by 
Brian Carpenter, has been fixed.

- the abstract has been reworded in an attempt to clarify confusing 
wording identified by the Gen-ART reviewer - Eric Gray.

- in response to another review comment an example has been added to the 
security considerations section, showing how a proxy might control 
access for requests addressed to a GRUU.

- some grammatical nits identified by reviewers have been fixed.

- the plural usage of GRUU was changed from GRUU to GRUUs for 
consistency with draft-ietf-sip-gruu. (I changed it the other way for 
consistency a few revs back, but the pendulum swung again.)

- the quoting conventions have been regularized when referring to the 
name of an event package.

- the big semantic change is that now two there is provision for 
including both public and anonymous GRUUs, using <pub-gruu> and 
<anon-gruu>, rather than a single <gruu>. This is for alignment with 
gruu-11. This required changes in numerous places, including the examples.

- extra normative language and security considerations have been added 
relative to the inclusion of an anonymous gruu in a notification.

- gruu-11 renamed the URI parameters it uses from "gruu" to "gr, and 
from "opaque" to "aor-qual". While this has no normative effect on this 
draft, the examples were aligned with the change.

- boilerplate was updated (automatically by xml2rfc).

- the version number in the reference to draft-ietf-sip-gruu has been 
updated (by xml2rfc) from -07 to -10. Unfortunately it should be -11, 
but isn't because I submitted first. Sigh! I guess it doesn't matter 
because the RFC editor will have to change it to a reference to the RFC 
in any case.

Hopefully this is the last revision of this!

	Paul

[e-mail] wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Session Initiation Proposal Investigation Working Group of the IETF.
> 
> 	Title		: Registration Event Package Extension for 
>                           Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) Globally 
>                           Routable User Agent URIs (GRUUs)
> 	Author(s)	: P. Kyzivat
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-sipping-gruu-reg-event-07.txt
> 	Pages		: 14
> 	Date		: 2006-10-13
> 	
> RFC 3680 defines a Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) event package
>    for registration state.  This package allows a watcher to learn about
>    information stored by a SIP registrar, including its registered
>    contact.
> 
>    However, the registered contact is frequently unreachable and thus
>    not useful for watchers.  The Globally Routable User Agent URI
>    (GRUU), defined in RFC YYYY [3], is a URI that is capable of reaching
>    a particular contact.  However this URI is not included in the
>    document format defined in RFC 3680.  This specification defines an
>    extension to the registration event package to include GRUUs assigned
>    by the registrar.
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