Re: [Slim] Early AD review of draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-04.txt

[Nik Tomkinson <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Alexey, I'll raise these as tickets and deal with them.

Nik.

On 16 August 2016 at 11:55, Alexey Melnikov <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Hopefully this will help the discussion:
>
> In Section 3.2, message/global needs a reference (RFC 6532).
>
> In Section 4, 2nd para: you are restating a requirement from MIME. Don't
> use RFC 2119 keywords here.
>
> In Section 8 (all examples in subsections): From/To header fields must
> include email addresses in order to be syntactically correct.
>
> In Section 11: you need to use the official Media Type registration
> template from RFC 6838.
>
>
> On Mon, Aug 15, 2016, at 06:12 PM, Natasha Rooney wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> The chairs have reviewed the tickets we currently have and have asked the
> author to make edits where necessary. All the tickets we had were for the
> draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-04 draft. This means we likely
> have not had the required number of reviewers for the draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-04[2]
> draft. Therefore, here are the actions and next steps.
>
>
>    - *ACTION:* Randall, please take a look at the comments on the tickets
>    and make changes where necessary.
>    - *ACTION: All*, please review the draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-04[2]
>    draft, and send tickets if changes are needed
>    - Please also let us know you have read it, as then we know how many
>       reviewers there have been.
>       - *NEXT STEP: *After changes have been made, Bernard will start
>    pushing the document through the RFC process (requesting AD reviews etc.)
>
>
> If there are any questions please let us know! Many thanks!
>
> Natasha
>
> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-slim-
> negotiating-human-language/
> [2] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent/
>
> Natasha Rooney | Internet Engineering Director | GSMA | [e-mail] |
> [phone] | @thisNatasha | Skype: [e-mail]
>
>
> On 22 Jul 2016, at 11:39, Natasha Rooney <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Hi all,
>
> Thanks for the meeting this week. We are pleased to announce that both
> drafts below have entered into Working Group Last Call. We will aim to exit
> WGLC on 12th August, which gives us three week from today.
>
> draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent-01
> Multiple Language Content Type
>
> draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-01
> Negotiating Human Language in Real-Time Communications
>
> *Issues: *if you have issues please submit these to the IETF Issue
> Tracker at [1]. Please feel free to discuss items on the list also.
>
> Thanks everyone!
>
> Natasha
>
> [1] https://tools.ietf.org/wg/slim/trac/newticket
>
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Multiple Language Content Type Internet Draft:

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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-slim-multilangcontent/
<http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-tomkinson-slim-multilangcontent/>

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