Re: [smartpower-interest] Fwd: I-D Action:draft-baker-ietf-core-12.txt

"R. B." <framefritti@gmail.com> Wed, 02 March 2011 12:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [smartpower-interest] Fwd: I-D Action:draft-baker-ietf-core-12.txt
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Just a minimal observation : on page 10, almost at the end of  section 2.2,
RFC 3522 (The Eifel Detection Algorithm for TCP) is cited, but maybe RFC
3552 (Guidelines for Writing RFC Text on Security Considerations) was meant?

2011/3/2 Fred Baker <fred@cisco.com>

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> >       Title           : Internet Protocols for the Smart Grid
> >       Author(s)       : F. Baker, D. Meyer
> >       Filename        : draft-baker-ietf-core-12.txt
> >       Pages           : 61
> >       Date            : 2011-03-01
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> > This note identifies the key protocols of the Internet Protocol Suite
> > for use in the Smart Grid.  The target audience is those people
> > seeking guidance on how to construct an appropriate Internet Protocol
> > Suite profile for the Smart Grid.  In practice, such a profile would
> > consist of selecting what is needed for Smart Grid deployment from
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