[Softwires] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-yang-14: (with COMMENT)

Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Mon, 07 January 2019 17:06 UTC

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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-softwire-yang-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Some minor comments:

1) Sec 4.2:
"softwire-path-mru: optionally used to set the maximum IPv6
      softwire packet size that can be received, including the
      encapsulation/translation overhead.  Needed if the softwire
      implementation is unable to correctly calculate the correct IPv4
      Maximum Receive Unit (MRU) size automatically [RFC4213]."
I guess this should both be IPv6...?

2) Why does the description of "rcvd-ipv4-bytes" say
"IPv4 traffic received for processing, in bytes"..?
Does the "for processing" have any special meaning or why is it only phrased
like this for that one entry?

3) Also the description for "sent-ipv4-bytes" and "sent-ipv4-packets" could be
unified.