[Softwires] Comments on 6rd mib draft-//RE: Fwd: I-D Action: draft-cai-softwire-6rd-mib-05.txt

Hi, Shishio & All

I support this draft. I think it is valuable to have a dedicated MIB definition for 6rd.

A few comments:
1. Current draft hasn't contained conformance definition yet. But it is needed, please check section 4.8 in RFC4181 for details.
2. The top level division of the sixRdMIB should follow the recommended style of separating objects, notification, and conformance at the top level.
3. There were several places using "InetAddressIPv6" directly. Please check rfc4001, it is specified that we should use the InetAddressType/InetAddress pair for both IPv4/IPv6 address definition. 
4. In the MIB definition, there is a sixRdDevice object, but it was not included in section 4 "Structure of the MIB Module". I think it is better to remain a consistency in MIB description and definition.

Best regards,
Bing

> -----Original Message-----
> From: softwires-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:softwires-bounces@ietf.org] On
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> Subject: [Softwires] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-cai-softwire-6rd-mib-05.txt
> 
> I update 6rd MIB.
> Add sixRdSecurityCheck object.
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-cai-softwire-6rd-mib-05#section-4.3
> 
> The MIB counts drop packets by 6rd receiving rule.
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5969#section-9.2
> 
> Regards,
> -Shishio
> 
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> Subject: I-D Action: draft-cai-softwire-6rd-mib-05.txt
> Date: Thu, 16 May 2013 08:51:43 -0700
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> 	Title           : Definitions of Managed Objects for 6rd
> 	Author(s)       : Lei Cai
>                           Jacni Qin
>                           Shishio Tsuchiya
> 	Filename        : draft-cai-softwire-6rd-mib-05.txt
> 	Pages           : 10
> 	Date            : 2013-05-16
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> Abstract:
>    This document defines a portion of the Management Information Base
>    (MIB) for use with network management protocols.  In particular, it
>    defines objects for managing 6rd devices.
> 
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