[lamps] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 19 June 2018 02:38 UTC

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Subject: [lamps] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5750-bis-06: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
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COMMENT:
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Thanks to everyone for the work put into updating this document. I reviewed
the diffs from the previous RFC, and the changes all seem to make sense.  I
found a couple of minor editorial nits.

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§2.2.1:

>  Receiving agents MUST be able to parser and process a message
>  containing PKCS #6 extended certificates although ignoring those
>  certificates is expected behavior.

Nit: "...be able to parse..."

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§A.1:

>  -  Hash functions used to validate signatures on historic messages
>     may longer be considered to be secure (see below).

Nit: "...may no longer..."

>     While there
>     are not currently any known practical pre-image or second pre-
>     image attacks against MD5 or SHA-1, the fact they are no longer
>     considered to be collision resistant the security levels of the
>     signatures are generally considered suspect.

This final clause appears to be missing some words. Consider rephrasing.