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Re: [lamps] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect

Jonathan Hammell <jfhamme.cccs@gmail.com> Fri, 22 May 2020 13:08 UTC

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From: Jonathan Hammell <jfhamme.cccs@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 May 2020 09:08:34 -0400
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Subject: Re: [lamps] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect
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I have reviewed this document for WGLC and I just have one minor
editorial nit in the second paragraph of the Security Considerations:

   "The CMSAlgorithmProtection attribute [RFC6211] offers protection the
   algorithm identifiers..."

I think it is missing a preposition and could be fixed as follows:

   "The CMSAlgorithmProtection attribute [RFC6211] offers protection for the
   algorithm identifiers..."

Otherwise, I think it is ready for publication.  Thanks, Russ, for
writing this document.

Best regards,
Jonathan


On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 3:45 PM Tim Hollebeek <tim.hollebeek@digicert.com> wrote:
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> This is the LAMPS WG Last Call for "Update to the Cryptographic Message Syntax (CMS) for Algorithm Identifier Protection” <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-01>.  Please review the document and send your comments to the list by 22 May 2020.
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> The datatracker page for the document is https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect/
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