Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-08.txt

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Subject: Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-08.txt
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On Wed 2022-02-02 14:23:30 -0800, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>         Title           : S/MIME Example Keys and Certificates
>         Author          : Daniel Kahn Gillmor
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-lamps-samples-08.txt

This draft merely applies the small handful of editorial nits picked
during review.

The most substantive changes here are:

 - switching the SHOULD comment about inclusion in denylists to a should
   (at Robin Wilton's suggestion)

 - adding normative references to RFC5958 (PKCS#8) and RFC8479 (RSA
   validation parameters) to describe asymmetric private key material --
   thanks, Ben Kaduk.

 - swapping normative/informative for RFC7468 (PEM encoding, now
   normative) and RFC5322 (Internet Message Format, now informative) --
   Kaduk again.

I believe the draft is now ready to go.

  --dkg