Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-21.txt

["Brockhaus, Hendrik" <[e-mail]>]

David, Steffen, and I reviewed the usage of normative language in the whole
Document and performed several changes following Murray's valuable guidance.
The previous update also addressed John's IANA expert review.

>From version 20 -> 21:
   *  Addressed comment from Murray checking each usage of key word
      "SHOULD" and changing it to "MUST", "MAY", or "should" where
      needed or adding an explanation how interoperability may be
      affected (see thread "Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-
      ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-18: (with COMMENT)")
   *  Some minor editorial changes

>From version 19 -> 20:
   *  Addressed comment from John (see thread "[IANA #1261900] expert
      review for draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile (cmp)")

Any feedback is welcome.

Hendrik

> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> Von: Spasm <[e-mail]> Im Auftrag von [e-mail]
> Gesendet: Freitag, 17. Februar 2023 15:32
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> Betreff: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-21.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Limited Additional Mechanisms for PKIX
> and SMIME WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Lightweight Certificate Management Protocol (CMP) Profile
>         Authors         : Hendrik Brockhaus
>                           David von Oheimb
>                           Steffen Fries
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-21.txt
>   Pages           : 107
>   Date            : 2023-02-17
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document aims at simple, interoperable, and automated PKI
>    management operations covering typical use cases of industrial and
>    IoT scenarios.  This is achieved by profiling the Certificate
>    Management Protocol (CMP), the related Certificate Request Message
>    Format (CRMF), and HTTP-based or CoAP-based transfer in a succinct
>    but sufficiently detailed and self-contained way.  To make secure
>    certificate management for simple scenarios and constrained devices
>    as lightweight as possible, only the most crucial types of operations
>    and options are specified as mandatory.  More specialized or complex
>    use cases are supported with optional features.
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