Re: [Speermint] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-speermint-terminology-16.txt

I read the last version of the terminology document and it looks ok to
me. 

A few minor comments:
a) Reference sections
The terminology document has an informational status and no 2119 verbs.
Should the normative references be moved to the informative reference?
Also, please check the IDnits and warnings for unused references:
http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/
Checking references for intended status: Informational

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  == Unused Reference: '9' is defined on line 480, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[9]   Narten, T. and H. Alvestrand, "Guidelines for Writing an
IANA...'

  == Unused Reference: '10' is defined on line 484, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[10]  Dierks, T. and E. Rescorla, "The TLS Protocol Version 1.1",
RF...'

  == Unused Reference: '11' is defined on line 487, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[11]  Postel, J., "User Datagram Protocol", STD 6, RFC 768, August
1...'

  == Unused Reference: '12' is defined on line 490, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[12]  Postel, J., "DoD Standard Transmission Control Protocol",
RFC...'

  == Unused Reference: '13' is defined on line 493, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[13]  Plummer, David C., "An Ethernet Address Resolution
Protocol",...'

  == Unused Reference: '14' is defined on line 496, but no explicit
reference
     was found in the text
     '[14]  Babiarz, J., Chan, K., and F. Baker, "Configuration
Guidelines...'

c) other typos:
The RFC editor will likely catch that but just in case:
In "7. Security Considerations": s/analyzes/analyses ?

Jean-Francois.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: speermint-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:speermint-
> bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Livingood, Jason
> Sent: Wednesday, February 13, 2008 9:39 AM
> To: speermint@ietf.org
> Cc: Daryl Malas
> Subject: Re: [Speermint] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-speermint-
> terminology-16.txt
> 
> Since we've had a few WGLCs on this document already, we are
> calling an
> abbreviated WGLC from today, February 13, 2008, to February 21,
> 2008.
> 
> Thank you
> Jason
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> > This draft is a work item of the Session PEERing for
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> > 	Title		: SPEERMINT Terminology
> > 	Author(s)	: D. Malas, D. Meyer
> > 	Filename	: draft-ietf-speermint-terminology-16.txt
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> > 	Date		: 2008-2-12
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