[spfbis] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7208 (5227)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7208,
"Sender Policy Framework (SPF) for Authorizing Use of Domains in Email, Version 1".

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Type: Technical
Reported by: David Garfield <[e-mail]>

Section: 5.5

Original Text
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   The <ip>'s name is looked up using this procedure:

   o  Perform a DNS reverse-mapping for <ip>: Look up the corresponding
      PTR record in "in-addr.arpa." if the address is an IPv4 address
      and in "ip6.arpa." if it is an IPv6 address.

   o  For each record returned, validate the domain name by looking up
      its IP addresses.  To prevent DoS attacks, the PTR processing
      limits defined in Section 4.6.4 MUST be applied.  If they are
      exceeded, processing is terminated and the mechanism does not
      match.

   o  If <ip> is among the returned IP addresses, then that domain name
      is validated.

   Check all validated domain names to see if they either match the
   <target-name> domain or are a subdomain of the <target-name> domain.
   If any do, this mechanism matches.  If no validated domain name can
   be found, or if none of the validated domain names match or are a
   subdomain of the <target-name>, this mechanism fails to match.  If a
   DNS error occurs while doing the PTR RR lookup, then this mechanism
   fails to match.  If a DNS error occurs while doing an A RR lookup,
   then that domain name is skipped and the search continues.

   This mechanism matches if

   o  the <target-name> is a subdomain of a validated domain name, or

   o  the <target-name> and a validated domain name are the same.

   For example, "mail.example.com" is within the domain "example.com",
   but "mail.bad-example.com" is not.


Corrected Text
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   The <ip>'s name is looked up using this procedure:

   o  Perform a DNS reverse-mapping for <ip>: Look up the corresponding
      PTR record in "in-addr.arpa." if the address is an IPv4 address
      and in "ip6.arpa." if it is an IPv6 address.

   Check all domain names to see if they either match the
   <target-name> domain or are a subdomain of the <target-name>
   domain.  If any do, this domain name can be validated.  If no
   domain name can be found, or if none of the domain names match or
   are a subdomain of the <target-name>, this mechanism fails to
   match.  If a DNS error occurs while doing the PTR RR lookup, then
   this mechanism fails to match.

   This mechanism may match if

   o  the <target-name> is a subdomain of a domain name, or

   o  the <target-name> and a domain name are the same.

   For example, "mail.example.com" is within the domain "example.com",
   but "mail.bad-example.com" is not.


   The domain names received must also be validated for the mechanism
   to match.

   o For each matched record, validate the domain name by looking up
      its IP addresses.  To prevent DoS attacks, the PTR processing
      limits defined in Section 4.6.4 MUST be applied.  If they are
      exceeded, processing is terminated and the mechanism does not
      match.

   o  If <ip> is among the returned IP addresses, then that domain name
      is validated.

   If a DNS error occurs while doing an A RR lookup, then that domain
   name is skipped and the search continues.


   The mechanism matches if a domain name is found that properly
   matches the target name and can be properly validated.  While these
   tests can be done in either order, performing the match before
   validating prevents needless DNS queries being performed.


Notes
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As specified, the RFC calls for all names to be validated, even those that can be immediately discarded because they do not match.   The RFC should call for the local-only operation to be done first.  While it may be argued that the RFC doesn't require the order, implementers shouldn't be misled.

My corrected text probably needs editorial work.

I have not fixed errata 4751 in my corrected text.

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RFC7208 (draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-21)
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Title               : Sender Policy Framework (SPF) for Authorizing Use of Domains in Email, Version 1
Publication Date    : April 2014
Author(s)           : S. Kitterman
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : SPF Update
Area                : Applications
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG