Re: [spfbis] I-D Action: draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-02.txt

[Scott Kitterman <[e-mail]>]

On Friday, June 29, 2012 12:04:43 PM [e-mail] wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This draft is a work item of the SPF Update Working Group of
> the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Sender Policy Framework (SPF) for Authorizing Use
> of Domains in Email, Version 1 Author(s)       : Scott Kitterman
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-02.txt
>         Pages           : 56
>         Date            : 2012-06-29

Here's the revision log additions for this version:

	      Refer to RFC6647 to describe greylisting instead of trying to	
 	      describe it directly.	
 		
 	      Updated informative references to the current versions.	
 		
 	      Added definition for deprecated since there are questions.	
 		
 	      Start to rework section 9 with some RFC5598 terms.	
 		
 	      Added mention of RFC 6552 feedback reports in section 9.	
 		
 	      Added draft-ietf-spfbis-experiment as an informational reference.	
 		
 	      Initial draft of wording to deprecate Type SPF.	
 		
 	      Try and clarify informational nature of RFC3696

In particular, the changes for Type 99/SPF deprecation and the changes to 
section 9 to modernize it a bit and use terminology from the email 
architecture document should be reviewed.

Have a nice weekend.

Scott K