Re: [spring] I-D Action: draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt

[Stefano Salsano <[e-mail]>]

Il 2019-12-19 12:51, Pablo Camarillo (pcamaril) ha scritto:
> We have published a new revision of draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming that addresses comments received throughout this week.
[...]
> -	Renamed Transit Behaviors section as discussed with Adrian

Hi Pablo,

I strongly agree with this change... it was misleading to refer to the 
encapsulation behaviors as "transit" behaviors

please align the terminology according to this change, my suggestions 
follow:

1) in section 7 Security Consideration
errata: This document introduces SRv6 Endpoint and Transit Nodes behaviors
corrige: This document introduces SRv6 Endpoint and SR Policy Headend 
behaviors

2) in section 8.4
errata: The following table summarizes which transit capabilities are
corrige: The following table summarizes which SR Policy Headend 
capabilities are

errata: Table 2: SRv6 transit behaviors signaling
corrige: Table 2: SRv6 Policy Headend behaviors signaling

3) in section 5.1
errata: The H.Encaps transit encapsulation behavior
corrige: The H.Encaps encapsulation behavior

ciao
Stefano


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> Subject: [spring] I-D Action: draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt
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>      
>      A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>      This draft is a work item of the Source Packet Routing in Networking WG of the IETF.
>      
>              Title           : SRv6 Network Programming
>              Authors         : Clarence Filsfils
>                                Pablo Camarillo Garvia
>                                John Leddy
>                                Daniel Voyer
>                                Satoru Matsushima
>                                Zhenbin Li
>      	Filename        : draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07.txt
>      	Pages           : 38
>      	Date            : 2019-12-19
>      
>      Abstract:
>         The SRv6 Network Programming framework enables a network operator or
>         an application to specify a packet packet processing program by
>         encoding a sequence of instructions in the IPv6 packet header.
>      
>         Each instruction is implemented on one or several nodes in the
>         network and identified by an SRv6 Segment Identifier in the packet.
>      
>         This document defines the SRv6 Network Programming concept and
>         specifies the base set of SRv6 behaviors that enables the creation of
>         interoperable overlays with underlay optimization (Service Level
>         Agreements).
>      
>      
>      The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming/
>      
>      There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07
>      
>      A diff from the previous version is available at:
>      https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-07
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