Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 (5384)
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Fri, 08 June 2018 08:58 UTC
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Subject: Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 (5384)
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James, I believe "iff" was intended as written. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/If_and_only_if Adrian > -----Original Message----- > From: spring [mailto:spring-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of RFC Errata System > Sent: 08 June 2018 09:11 > To: sprevidi@cisco.com; cfilsfil@cisco.com; bruno.decraene@orange.com; > stephane.litkowski@orange.com; Martin.Horneffer@telekom.de; rjs@rob.sh; > db3546@att.com; aretana.ietf@gmail.com; martin.vigoureux@nokia.com; > bruno.decraene@orange.com; robjs@google.com > Cc: spring@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; jwbensley@gmail.com > Subject: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 (5384) > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7855, > "Source Packet Routing in Networking (SPRING) Problem Statement and > Requirements". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5384 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: James Bensley <jwbensley@gmail.com> > > Section: 3.3.1.1.1 > > Original Text > ------------- > C1k has a link to C2j iff k = j. > > The core nodes of a given region are directly connected. > Inter-region links only connect core nodes of the same plane. > > {C1k has a link to C1j} iff {C2k has a link to C2j}. > > Corrected Text > -------------- > C1k has a link to C2j if k = j. > > The core nodes of a given region are directly connected. > Inter-region links only connect core nodes of the same plane. > > {C1k has a link to C1j} if {C2k has a link to C2j}. > > Notes > ----- > Does "iff" mean something special that is different to "if" or is this a typo? If the > former, should it be called out in a glossary? > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC7855 (draft-ietf-spring-problem-statement-08) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Source Packet Routing in Networking (SPRING) Problem Statement > and Requirements > Publication Date : May 2016 > Author(s) : S. Previdi, Ed., C. Filsfils, Ed., B. Decraene, S. Litkowski, M. > Horneffer, R. Shakir > Category : INFORMATIONAL > Source : Source Packet Routing in Networking > Area : Routing > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG > > _______________________________________________ > spring mailing list > spring@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/spring
- Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 … James Bensley
- Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 … Alexander Vainshtein
- Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 … Rob Shakir
- Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 … James Bensley
- Re: [spring] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7855 … Adrian Farrel
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