[stir] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-servprovider-oob-05

Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 29 March 2024 01:21 UTC

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Subject: [stir] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-servprovider-oob-05

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-stir-servprovider-oob-05
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2024-03-28
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-31
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is probably ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     There is one aspect of the CPS Advertisements that I was unable to follow.
      I presume this is clear to those participating in the work, but wonder if
     my confusion indicates potential for clarification.  The draft contains a
     very clear description of the cotnent of the advertisements, and how those
     advertisements can be used to map from a phone call being placed to URI to
     submit the PassPort.  However, I do not know how the placing party finds
     the advertisements themselves?  Is there some assumption about a STIR
     related information repository that would provide these?

Nits/editorial comments: N/A

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