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Re: [stir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21

Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net> Sun, 16 October 2022 15:58 UTC

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From: Chris Wendt <chris-ietf@chriswendt.net>
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Date: Sun, 16 Oct 2022 11:58:08 -0400
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Subject: Re: [stir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-21
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Hi Florian,

Thanks for the review, I have addressed your nits in the next release.

> On Oct 12, 2022, at 3:05 AM, Florian Obser via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Florian Obser
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I'm the assigned reviewer of the DNS Directorate for this draft.
> This document does not reference the DNS, and has no considerations
> that reflect on the DNS.
> 
> The reviewer is not familiar with PASSporT and is not in a position to
> make qualified comment on the topic.
> That being said, this specification to add signed and integrity
> protected rich call data is clearly motivated and the proposed
> extension is clearly expressed.
> 
> A list of nits follows.
> 
> Page 5:
> 3 times: s/passport/PASSporT/

Fixed

> 
> Page 13:
> s/contraint/constraint/

Fixed

> 
> Page 15:
> 
>   This document defines a new JSON Web Token claim for "crn", Call
>   Reason, the value of which is a single string that can contains
>   information as defined in
> 
> ... that can contain
> 

Fixed

> 
> Page 20
> s/consisent/consistent/

Fixed

> 
> Page 22
> s/PASSport/PASSporT/

Fixed

> 
> Page 25
> s/PASSport/PASSporT/

Fixed

> 
> Page 26
> s/cooresponding/corresponding/

Fixed

> 
> Page 29
> s/availbility/availability/
> 
> 

Fixed 

>

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