[stir] draft-ietf-stir-rfc4474bis

Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Thu, 27 October 2016 21:06 UTC

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I have not gotten around to doing a review of this document, which I was
trying to do as part of the passport review.  However, on a fast pass I did
back then I did note the following error.

In section 4, I think that signed-identity-digest is supposed to accommodate
a PASSporT.  However, the ABNF is incorrect.  It should be 

signed-identity-digest = *(base64-char / ".")

jim